Play The Game of Immortality.

Play The Game of Immortality.

A Poem by Melody
"

Just wait. Be patient, play the game of immortality.

"
Just wait,
be patient.
He'll come eventually.
He'll come and take the trait.
Just be patient,
and play the game of immortality.

We play the game of immortality.
We refuse the drink of swimming cells.
We refuse to imbibe the rich red wine liquid.
We do not carry allergies of the sun
We do not hold a heart with no beats,
And yet we play the game of immortality.

Swallow.
Breathe.
I promise pain.
An eternity spent with me
as your queen.

© 2013 Melody


Author's Note

Melody
Thought I'd post this. Tell me what you think please.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

'Play the game of immorality', I really like the name and concept of the poem. It was simple, simply deep. You can't just read and pass on, it holds you and make you think about each word and line. :) to me it was a poem for pain, one is in love with and he/she is intending to get immortal with it. Well its just my perception and I really like it that way.
Great poem, keep writing and sharing.

God bless. .

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

That is an amazing way to look at!! :O I didn't even think of that! I applaud! Thank you
I thought it was great and is it about Vampires?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Thanks. :) And I'm not sure. From my perspective, it could be about anything.
Mystic_Angel

12 Years Ago

well I like it :D
Melody

12 Years Ago

Thank you. Thanks tons. :)

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

193 Views
2 Reviews
Added on December 29, 2012
Last Updated on January 5, 2013

Author

Melody
Melody

TX



About
My name is Melanie. Not the best name. Not the worst. I am a person. Not the best. Not the worst. I am Melanie. more..

Writing
Forever Forever

A Poem by Melody


Ira Ira

A Story by Melody