The Gift of Loving You

The Gift of Loving You

A Poem by Melody
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I love you and there is nothing that could ever change that because you are the gift I wish to see wrapped beautifully, strategically, thoughtfully...beneath my Christmas tree.

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Everything...
You make me see that everything
is not black and white,
everything is not what it seems...
You make me aware
when you're there...

Now I see that
maybe someday,
you can share to me
that tiny unimportant bit of you...
The bit that I love...
The bit that I crave to see because I'm too afraid to say three things...
I love you...
I love you!
I love you and there is nothing that could ever change that
because you are the gift I wish to see
wrapped beautifully, strategically, thoughtfully...beneath my Christmas tree.
You are the person I want jumping out of my birthday cake
to make all those days that you had been gone...suddenly disappear.

But out of all of those things,
I want to see you...
So I can tell you...
How much you matter to me,
how many times you have saved my life,
how many times you have wiped away my tears without lifting a single finger,
how many times you made me smile when I thought I never could,
how many times you made me laugh when I gave up and took life a little too seriously,
how many times you made me think about all the stuff that seemed...unimportant,
and I really want to see you...
So I can tell you..
How much I love you...

© 2012 Melody


Author's Note

Melody
Finally found a suiting title for it! Thank you tons JS and Harley for your ideas. I looked at them and smashed them into one. THANK YOU SO MUCH! YOU SAVED MY INSANITY!! XD

Hope you and enjoyed the poem, now all you have left to do on that list is tell me what you thought about it! :)

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the repition is amazing! Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Perfect title, wonderful poem, beautiful words. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Thank you! :D
yeah that was a perfect title for this incredible poem
very simple and the truth is there
=]

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
CHRIS ANDES

12 Years Ago

y.w
=]
A couple of lines in here made me think that this is a long distance relationship. "Wiping away my tears without lifting a single finger." Well, if that's not what it's about, that's what I got of it anyway. The Christmas tree line is quite unique. Nicely penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Lol. I guess for the speaker it could be. :) Thank you. I quite enjoy the Christmas tree line myself.. read more
i enjoyed this poem i like it..
this poem is great :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Irvette. :)
The Gift. A Gift. Gift. Anything with gift, that seems to be a big piece of your poem though you don't mention it much... Anyway, great poem! It's really deep and beautiful. :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


Admiral Kirk

12 Years Ago

lol :)
Melody

12 Years Ago

:D Thank you for the favorite J.S! :D :D :D
Admiral Kirk

12 Years Ago

You're welcome! :) :) :)
name? simple. i love you. and awesome poem btw

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Thank you, I will take it into consideration! :) Thank you. ^_^

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