When You're Gone

My heart whispers these words
words I'll never be able to say,
words that could break the precious white wings of our bird.
Is it possible that these words will hold the ship at bay?

What will I do when the waters in your eyes never shine?
What will I do when all happiness in your being has been sucked dry?
What will I do when the muscles are shut down just like the front line?
What will I do when the personality no longer has a beautiful blue sky?

My eyes have these tears forming and I can't make them stop,
because the thoughts make this rendezvous seem silly and screwed-up.
What will I do when our world is taken away to get chopped,
like a pig being raised only to be put into a death cup?

What will I do when you're gone?
If you runaway would I be able to move on?
What will I do after our imaginary world is shrunk and dried up like a pond?
What will I do when you're gone, how would I ever move on?

Author's Note

I know there will be a day when I'm all alone...What will I do with these three unsaid words when you're gone?

Reviews

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

*suieted applause* This is really great.

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

*quieted lol.

[Melody]

Lol thanks. :)

[Fréyjä Helv..]

The rhyming works and it had powerful emotions in it... Kudos!

[Melody]

Thank you. :)

[deepblue04]

wow, I like the flow, imagery is amazing! good job!

[Melody]

Thank you. :)

[Michael G.]

You expressed these feeling rather well.
It has a good feel and flow to it.

What will you say or do with those three words? You will know when the time comes.

[Melody]

Thank you, thank you. :)

[Shadow Kat]

Its absolutely beautiful! Reminds me of my favorite song for some reason. :) Great poem.

[Melody]

Lol. Thank you. :)

[afra]

beautiful ....i loved it

[Melody]

Thank you, Afra. :)

[Falling Leaf.]

I love!

[Melody]

I'm glad you love it. Lol. Thank you. :)

[Falling Leaf.]

No trouble at all.

[Irvette Dauphine]

really, this is amazing, full of emotion
like it :)

[Melody]

Thank you. :)