How Do You Know?

How Do You Know?

A Poem by Melody
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How do you know what these feelings are?...

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How do you know what love is?
What it feels like?
Does it make your insides tingle and your heart burst?
Does it feel like you're breaking free from an unbreakable prison cell?
Who's voice do you hear?
What does it say?
How do you know who it is that you've fallen so hard for
that you can't get back up?
What does love feel like and how do you know it's right?
How do you know what that feeling is?
How do you know and can somebody tell me?

Is it going to feel like you're two vines,
forever entwining, growing closer?
Is it going to feel like you're being built for sin,
to break the worst law, like putting your heart through surgery?
How do you know?
Can somebody tell me so I'm not to blame?

© 2012 Melody


Author's Note

Melody
I'm just a teenage girl who tries to see deeper than the average eye, but it's hard to do that when you have mystery and tantalizing feelings are.

Thank you for reading. Tell me what you think please, all reviews are much appreciated! :)

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when you mature, you will know... How you brought it out through questioning, it's brilliant. You got me questioning to. I got answers to it though I can't say that love is something predictable. It's not. You'll know it when you feel it. When you learn to accept imperfections. You will know...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
the questions are very effective! good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Gorgeouse. So many questions that sometimes cant be answered. Kind of like a child asking the famouse question "Why is the sky blue?" :) Its beautiful. Love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Many questions, food for thought. I'm not particularly fond of the "what is love" poems, but some of them are enjoyable. Nevertheless, there is much emotion here, much curiosity confusion wonder and so very much more, so I liked it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Whenever I read the "what is love" in your review I got reminded of that song that goes..."What is l.. read more
Nice job :) I ask myself these questions all the time. What can I say? I'm a hopeless romantic! Keep up the great work! You're anamazing writer.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Lol I know what you mean. Thank you.
Madeline

12 Years Ago

You're very welcome :D
questions that the answer is from yourself, nobody else
like this poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Indeed....Thank you Irvette. :)
A lot of questions asked here... questions without answers... Heh, I think you just know... It's weird... Cool poem. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Lol.
Admiral Kirk

12 Years Ago

You're welcome.
this was very deep ...well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


Melody

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Afra. :)

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