Curse

I feel like anyone can look at me
and have this need to tell me everything,
as if I'm the priest on the other side of the confessional window.

I feel like I have the curse that was gifted to me...
hearing the secrets of everyone around me.
Can everyone just quiet down...Please?

I feel like I carry different burdens,
things too heavy for my weak shoulders to bear.
Can everyone just leave me alone...Please?

I have needed to shed these tears,
these words, these secrets...
And with every letter,syllable,word,sentence that I write...I scream..

This girl can never stop hoping that someday
there will be someone to tell her
"Cry. Tell me. It will always be okay, somehow, someway."

Someday, I will hope this curse will do some good...
I have this curse that was gifted to me...I'll make it mine,
for now I'll do What I Can and look on all of the days of What I Could

Author's Note

I seem to have a thing for just typing things up lately. Tell me what you think?

Reviews

[deepblue04]

well, just for typing, that's really good. Good job!

[Melody]

Thank you. :)

[Shadow Kat]

Its beautifully done. :) I felt it, the pain, tears, desperation, I can somehow relate to this poem. I absolutely love it. :) I have the urge to say thanks for a great poem. :)

[Melody]

Lol. Thank you. :) >.

[Falling Leaf.]

I am terrible at keeping secrets. Someone tells me something and I'm near combustion. That's what writing is for, I say. I only saw one hiccup: third stanza. "...leave me along..." did you mean alone? Anyway, other than that, nice.

[Melody]

Another typo...Darn...
I'm quite the secret keeper. Thank you for telling me about the typo, once again. :) I'm glad you liked it. :)

[Pax]

i was really intrigue from start to finish, and i preserved differently, like you have supernatural power..lol..anyways great work

[Melody]

Thank you WillyamPax. It's greatly appreciated, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Pax]

yup, your welcome.

[afra]

i love this poem ....well done ...amazing write

[Melody]

Thank you, Afra. :)

[Gretchen Clarke]

This was a piece that I can relate to. I too carry a heavy burden, and I still carry it. Know what I do? I think about what the good parts of the burden. If there are none... I invent one!
Keep up the great work!

[Melody]

Lol. That sounds like a good way to lessen the burden.
Thank you, Gretchen. :)

[Gretchen Clarke]

No prob!

[Schyala]

Another Amazing poem! Good job :) 100/100

[Melody]

Thank you! :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

like this poem.. cant describe it, okay this is great.. :)

[Melody]

Thank you, Irvette! :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

you always welcome ^_^