Incurable Disease

It's not something you can take a picture of.
It's something you have to hold carefully, like a dove.

It's not something you can band-aid.
It's something that has to go unpaid.

It's not something you can forget.
It's something that should put you in debt.

It's not something that will always be a solid white canvas.
It's something that can drive you to madness.

It's not something that will go unheard, unseen.
It's something you can't always keep clean.

It's not something you can show the amount.
It's something that anyone is allowed.

It's not like a bruise, cut; anything you can defeat.
It's like an incurable disease.

Love, it's not an orange peel, you can not throw it down the sink.
Love, it's something that always legal, something everyone can drink.

Author's Note

^_^ I don't know, but I like it. Do you? Please tell me!

Reviews

[deepblue04]

the parallelism is really good, I like it

[Melody]

Thank you. :)

[Schyala]

Love your literary techniques! Great similes and metaphors! Good job! 100/100

[Melody]

:D Thank you so much, Syrinx! :D

[Irvette Dauphine]

like it..
great job :)

[Melody]

Thank you, Irvette. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

good one. liked the comparasons. great job

[Melody]

Thank you, Harley. :)