Trapped In A Box

Wrote this a long time ago too. I keep posting all of these old poems. XP

I'm trapped in a box,

And I'm stuck for good.

The seal is glued and taped over fifty times a hundred.

This barrier is unbreakable,

I know I can't pretend that everything wasn't a dream,

It was all reality.

Reality has a face,

And it isn't pretty.

The room smells of death,

No life succeeds.

It's unliveable.

The terror of war

The sadness of life and death,

It's all unbearable

Too hard and solid to watch

I'm trapped in this box forever,

The seals are glued and taped over fifty times a hundred.

I'm trapped in this box,

And forever unknown.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think please?

Reviews

[ewest1220]

Very sad and almost bitter in tone. Very well done you write beautifully as usual!

[Melody]

Thank you! >.<

[Brielle Cartny]

I like it! It is how a lot of us feel at times. Well done!

[Melody]

Thank you. :)

[julespinkyd]

there are no dreams only harsh realities. You got a voice girl and a great way to use it. I like the realism and truth in your words. Don't let it go away.

[Melody]

Thank you so much!! :D I will not lose my voice!