Kiss Me, Kill Me

I can never tell when,

I can never tell how,

But when I fall asleep at night,

I see you kiss me,

And see you kill me.

I see you do bad things to me,

And dance around in my blood that bathed the room.

 

You can never tell when,

You can never tell how,

But when you fall asleep at night,

You see me kiss you,

And you see me kill you.

You see me do bad things to you,

And dance around in your blood that bathed my room.

 

And when I wake up I’m wishing I was asleep,

Because the last thing I see is you

Kiss me,

Kill me.

 

Kiss me,

Kill me.

Kiss me with your sweet soft lips,

Kill me with poisoned teeth.

 

And when you wake up you’re wishing you were asleep,

Because the last thing you saw was me,

Kiss you,

Kill you.

 

Kissed you.

Killed you.

Kissed you with my cold hard lips.

Killed you with my poisoned teeth.

 

Kiss me.

Kill Me.

 

Kissed you.

Killed you.

 

Kiss me.

Kill me.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think please! I wrote it a long long time ago...Lol

Reviews

[Harley (arbiter)]

Awesome! Yeah, I revisit some of my poems, and it should help, but its good as is aswell.

[Melody]

Thank you! :)

[EMF]

Probably no one will be this frank with you. Right now it's a damn good dark poem. But revisit this 5 or ten years down the line, with a few more years and experience under your belt and it will be exceptional. Powerful enough to chill the marrow. It has the elements there now, but the finesse comes with the years I'm afraid. Right now it's stunning. Like a fine wine, it will mature into Vintage

[Melody]

Thank you! That really means a lot. And if it matures into vintage, I will be happy.
Thank you for being frank EMF. :)