See Through

Something I wrote a while back, my inspiration was school and family.

People don't see me,

They pretty much just let me be.

People seem to see right though me like a glass pane,

Surprising that even a few know me by face and name.

 

People seem to see right through me,

Almost as if I was a ghost,

They never noticed the ache of my heart or even my knee,

Society will never give me a toast.

 

I guess I'm just see through,

I guess I'm just a completely different color hue,

I know I'm just as see through,

I know if you were to compare of the great Pacific Blue.

 

I'm

See

Through.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think please! Complete honesty is appreciated!

Reviews

[EMF]

Anonimity is either a curse or a gift, depending on your perspective. And depending on who you want to notice you. Certainly this poem alone is compelling enough to get you noticed as a writer. A superb work that deals with a theme we all encounter at some time of our lives, and handled with a tight professionalism that belays your age. Superb work.

[Melody]

Thank you EMF! That really means a lot! I'm super glad you like it so! :D

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

I loved the thought and the words placed in this write, as well as the depth of the meaning. Just wish you stuck with an aabb or abab as it switched between the two and made it lose the flow, other than that loved it.

[Melody]

I appreciate your opinion Melody! It means a lot. :)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

It is only that an opinion, every one reads as well as writes diffrent. I am sure everyone will love it...I am just a "flow" girl;) that doesn't say an amazing write isn't amazing if it doesn't flow. I loved this...;)

[Melody]

Lol. I get what you're saying. My friends call me a grammar nazi, even though when I write, I always mess up my grammar. But I'm strict on spelling too, so I guess that's why. :P
Thank you.