Waking Up To A One-Sided Love

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I must say, it's easy to disappoint me and it's even easier to anger me. I've never been very patient, which would be the reason I'm absolutely and without a doubt horrible at the game hide and seek. But when my heart stops it's steady beat or goes erratic I know that I'm falling for somebody or when something is wrong with even a person I may not know or somebody that I hold dearly.
I'm terrified of a lot of things like: marriage, life, death, and my own blood. I'm intolerant to a lot of things like: children, when the tennis ball doesn't land where I wanted it to in a match, and sympathy and pity.
I understand that somethings, not everything, is meant to be. I understand that realizing that you're falling in love is the most relieving but most painful and confusing things, and I understand that when you notice the stars are all pointing towards the Moon and that you're the Sun, it's the most lonely thing.
I think it's about time, that I got told the truth, to see blooming roses instead of dying roses, and a sunset and wait for the sunrise with my one true love.
I find things every day that can amuse me, make me cry, or make me angry. I find things every moment of every one of those days that I either hate or love.
I find that waking up to a one-sided love is one of the hardest parts of being a teenager, because you never know if it's just you simply liking the person...Or falling in love.

Author's Note

Ugh..I personally hate having to make my writing sappy...But sometimes...You just gotta...

Reviews

[Fréyjä Helv..]

You can't really predict love when it's really there or not... A lot of people get confused over the emotion... We become misguided, blinded by what's really logical or probably rational. When we feel something over someone, our brains get this sort of malfunction... People think that thinking about someone all the time is love. It could possibly be that, but there will always be reasons. People say that when you're asked "Why do you love him/her?" and you'd answer, "I don't know", they say it's love. I think it's absurd... Love is merely acceptance. So instead of saying 'you don't know' just say "I could think of a million reasons."

[Melody]

I think that is probably the most logical and insightful things I've ever heard, seen, read...O.O read moreI think that is probably the most logical and insightful things I've ever heard, seen, read...O.O
Thank you for reading. :)

[Sam Gregory]

Well those were very wise words indeed

[Melody]

Agreed.

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Thank you so much... Hope it gives you guys a hint on how to not fall in the same traps of your own emotion...

[Sam Gregory]

I'm already trapped by my emotions I'm afraid, it's difficult not to be tbh

[Melody]

No no, thank you Vittoria. :)

[Fréyjä Helvití]

If you're trapped, better start asking yourself to bring out the logical and rational reasons for being what you are feeling right now... If it's pointless then wake up, if it's worth suffering, you better figure out your next move...

You're welcome Melody... :)

[Sam Gregory]

Oh it's worth suffering for :) Well, one of the things "trapping" me is. My next move isnt my move to make tbh.

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Hope u don't mind me asking what tbh means? :)

You'll figure that out sooner or later... Ask advice to friends, and try seeing things in a different perspective.. Maybe that way you'd see what's really wrong about it or if it's right, you know where you stand...

[Sam Gregory]

It means to be honest lol. And its not that I dont know whats wrong, the problem is a problem shared with me by my girlfriend, but she doesnt want professional help or for her mother to find out and that restrticts what i can do. I can only be there for her until shes ready to make the first step to help really, betraying her wishes would make her lose trust in the only person she trusts and then become more withdrawn(me)

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Oh Gosh! I think I know what you're talking about... You can't really get through tough decisions like that on your own. Good luck...

[Sam Gregory]

Thanks, its been goin on 18 months ish but shes gettin there

[ewest1220]

I agree with roxast. 100/100 from me too!

[Melody]

:D Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Wow, this writing is so amazing and emotional
100/100

[Melody]

Thanks. :D

[Gretchen Clarke]

Same here. I nearly barfed writing the recent chapters of my book, "Howling and Roaring in the Night" Hehe. I had to, though, since it made the plot more interesting. And don't even get me started on "Love Potion"!
Anyway, great job on this story. I hope that never happens to me! =P
Keep up the great work!

[Melody]

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. ^.^

[Gretchen Clarke]

Hey, speaking of the first book I mentioned (Howling and Roaring in the Night), can you please read it and review it?

[Melody]

Sure. :)

[Gretchen Clarke]

Thanks! :)

[Melody]

No problem. I'll try to read it here soon. My fingers are a little busy at the moment. Conversations everywhere, things to check. That kind of thing. But I will read it. If you could, send me an RR for it so I don't forget by accident. :)

[Gretchen Clarke]

'Aight!

[Shadow Kat]

Very good. I loved how you described the whole concept of love and like. :D

[Melody]

Thank you! :)

[Sam Gregory]

Powerful and emotive, well written :)

[Melody]

Thank you! :)

[diggitydawg]

wow this is amazing, I loved how you related to everyday living. :)

[Melody]

Thank you so much! :)

[Owlgirl]

Wow!! Very well written! My only grammer issue would be in the last line it should be "if you're simply liking" or "if you simply like". Other than that it's perfect! Awesome job!

[Melody]

Yeah, I need to go back and add to it and edit it. I always forget to do that before I press publish. Lol.
Thank you.:)