If I Was A Bird

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If I was a bird...

I'd be the bird that could never fly....

She'd flap her wings and never lift....

She'd only be able to watch and cry...

As the other birds flew so carelessly...

Not caring to give even one thought about her...

 

If I was a bird...

I'd sit all alone on a branch until the day that I die...

She'd probably never rift or shift...

She'd only be able to sit in the rain and then wait to dry...

As the other birds pass her by, she stares as she...

Thought what it'd be like to be a bird...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[ewest1220]

You had me hooked in the first two lines. A really great way to depict that concept of self doubt and questioning. Very nice.

[Melody]

Thank you! :)

[Sam Gregory]

Nice concept, I like the flow of this and the image of self doubt and low self esteem u show very well

[Melody]

Thank you! :)