My Knight

Meh..I don't know.

I wait and wait,
One day you came,
I was on the verge of giving up when I hear you whisper in my ear,
"Slow down, my painted cup, we shall tear and we shall hold each other dear."

 

My knight in shining armor,

I wait and wait,

to heal the days that you never came.

Author's Note

Just sort of popped into my head. Tell me what you think. I think I might change the title..:/

Reviews

[ewest1220]

Ok that is a great poem. Though to add a personal touch you may think of changing the name to "My Night." "A Night in Shining Armor" While quite relevant may be a tad cliche ;)

[Melody]

Hmm....Good point! I might just do that! :D
Thanks. :)

[ewest1220]

No problem!

[Ezekiel Silver]

Terrific poem! I liked the clear message you put in it. I think you could have made it longer but it's still a great work of literature! Keep on writing!!

[Melody]

Thank you! :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

For something that just popped into you're head I can relate and it was actually pretty good. I think it needs something more but I have no idea what. Awesome

[Melody]

Good, and thanks! :) I feel the same way, I just can't figure it out...yet. Thank you.