Hanging Amazement

About what the sky does to and for me. :) Enjoy!

The moon, it cries before my very eyes.
The stars, shine and try to make different dyes.
The sun, burns my skin and makes me cringe away from the skies.
The clouds, soft and fluffy, make me dream and make me wise.

Author's Note

Enjoy! Sort of forced but it also sort of came to me! Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[ewest1220]

I tripped up on the second line too. It didn't quite pull me the way your other works did. However I still enjoyed reading it!

[Melody]

I didn't want the 2nd line to make sense. The stars don't make sense to me, so I made the star line not make any sense. :)

[ewest1220]

Two-Shay O.o

[Melody]

Lol.
I could have sworn I had something really funny in that comment, but I guess not. XP

[Sam Gregory]

Pretty good but I feel I've read better from you tbh, I dont think I fully understand the second line. It had immagery but I just felt it was missing somethin, keep writing :)

[Melody]

Yeah, I agree. Definantly not my best.
I didn't want the 2nd line to make sense. The stars don't make sense to me, so I made the star line not make any sense. :)

[Sam Gregory]

Ah, well that makes sense lol

[Melody]

yeah.