Tending

Tending

A Poem by Melobldnfr
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Lavished beneath your rain

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12/29/15

I wake gently aching,
Our love consummated.
Freed are our true selves
In each other's need.

More than pleased,
I cannot explain
The many sensations
Lavished beneath your rain.

You talk to me in a way
That leaves little disguise,
With your mouth, your pen,
Your fingers, actions, eyes...

Accepting me to be,
Emboldening me to reach,
Watering my seeds
And tending my leaves.

© 2015 Melobldnfr


Author's Note

Melobldnfr
Art: Tending The Garden by Reid Robert Lewis

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I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR WRITING.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melobldnfr

9 Years Ago

Thank you BB for stopping by. Glad you like.
A beautiful and visual piece. This is quite thought provoking and soft in its feel. Remarkable writing that touches the reader.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melobldnfr

9 Years Ago

Good to hear! Your perspective re this piece is appreciated. Thank you for sharing!
A hare off

9 Years Ago

It was my pleasure.

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Melobldnfr
Melobldnfr

Wichita, KS



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