How Many Times

How Many Times

A Poem by Melobldnfr
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Song

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01/27/14


Did you think the poems came from nowhere?

Did you not feel my pain?

Could you not see in order to get wet

Girl, I've surely stood in the rain...


You thought you'd come and take me

And I'd have nothing to say


You wanna know me inside out

Pick apart my brains

Dump your load until my head explodes

With all your history and hopes and fears and mundane


Just make the noise stop

Girl you drive me insane


Now you wanna be mad

Wanted me pinned to your side

And it's so ironic now

Considering how many times I'd have been some other fool's bride


You'll forgive me Honey

Or you'll die tryin'

© 2014 Melobldnfr


Author's Note

Melobldnfr
Lucinda Williams style blues!

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I can practically feel the emotion and intensity of this piece in 3D. This is certainly the work of a poet going deep inside herself and pulling out the rawest pieces of her soul. A powerful and poignant piece my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melobldnfr

11 Years Ago

Yes, Steve, it is a very different piece for me. I wish I could play it for you. I didn't know I c.. read more
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

That would be pretty cool...I'd love to hear it sometime.
Great stuff, I also like that the title reminds me of a Led Zeppelin song, bonus points for that

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melobldnfr

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. No intended tie with Led Zeppelin, but that is cool to think about. I appreciat.. read more
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

How Many More Times haha

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Melobldnfr
Melobldnfr

Wichita, KS



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