The Human Factor

The Human Factor

A Poem by Melobldnfr
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Thank you sparrows, Aphrodite, and college algebra.

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10/09/13

 

You work from your end,

And I work from mine -

Reaching toward linked

Goals in space and time.

 

We are two different factors

Of the same whole,

Different parts and backgrounds

With the same goal.

 

The part you have gained

I have yet to achieve,

But I am working diligently

And will accomplish that directly.

 

The part I have accomplished

Now must be your aim.

I push for your success so in the middle we can gain

Each other in gaining ourselves.

 

We are not opposition,

We've merely juxtaposed positions

That when multiplied together

Spell:  Source equals Destiny!

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Melobldnfr


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So amazing! I love the impact of this poem and the partnership aspect. Lovely. :)

100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melobldnfr

11 Years Ago

Thank you Nora. Appreciate this so much!
Felicity's Eve

11 Years Ago

No problem! I saw your collab poem and couldn't resist checking you out. :)
Melobldnfr

11 Years Ago

I am really glad you have. Thanks again.

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Melobldnfr
Melobldnfr

Wichita, KS



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