Do You Want To See?

A fair and valid question.

08/09/13

 

I was, am, without expectation.

I am not trying to woo,

Am only being me.

 

I'd not overwhelm you,

Have you feel part of some list,

Nor risk losing mojo via overstimulation.

 

You stated you do not know

Where this is going outside the moment.

Nor do I.

 

I have not proposed it go anywhere.

While I am usually a glass half-full,

I am learning regarding the spatial

 

To be less

linear.

 

I have no agenda.

 

My words strip me bare,

And while you have

Experienced me

This way for others,

You have not seen me

Naked by words for you.

 

So I am asking,

Do you want to see?

 

Afterall,

I am,

We are,

About far more than "the nudity".

 

 

Author's Note

Art: "Sleep With Butterflies" by Stephanie Law

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

This was so good Melo.. honest and heartfelt...
do we love for the person...or for the excitement...the ideal...the moment?
I don't know..I'm just asking but you certainly drove your point home in a most dramatic, shameless way.
You have every right to know... we all do... To old for games...
Excellent write Melo
allen

[Melobldnfr]

Thank you so much Allen. I really appreciate your thoughts here. I wasn't aiming for dramatic, but I can definitely see that. As for shameless, definitely! Xo.

[kublakhan27]

The most excruciating time in a burgeoning relationship...I love the way you've laid it out here, with some very nice imagery...I loved the idea of being less linear...nicely done Mel :)

[Melobldnfr]

Thank you so much K. You have no idea how much I appreciate it. Xo.

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure :) xo

[Androglossia]

Hesitation is a natural thing especially when the other party do not show the things we want to see or say the words we want to hear. I guess it's human nature. For whether we like or not we always have this inner desire to have at least an idea of the future. This is confession, Mel. Bare-naked.

[Melobldnfr]

Confession, yes. Shame, no. Lol. ;-)

As for the future, it is going to have to catch me. Xo.

[Melobldnfr]

I've spent so much of my life, time, and energy wanting to know, wanting to know; waiting with bated breath. Now I just want to express, express, express! =)

[Androglossia]

I know how you feel:) Like I said, we are so blessed to have been able to express what we feel which cannot be said aloud yet cannot remain silent.

[Melobldnfr]

Exactly right!