Beautiful poetry in the second stanza...relationships are hard work, they have their ups and downs, but when the tenderness you speak of is there, any tribulation can be overcome...that's what came to my mind in reading this piece, I hope I'm not too far off the mark haha Lovely work Mel :)
You are not far off. There is that tenderness. Only, to overcome would imply there be a destinatio.. read moreYou are not far off. There is that tenderness. Only, to overcome would imply there be a destination, or a goal other than that which was in the moment.
Thank you for your review. I really appreciate it. Especially that you called it "Lovely". :-}
11 Years Ago
I know what you mean, and hopefully a destination will reveal itself in due time...always a pleasur.. read moreI know what you mean, and hopefully a destination will reveal itself in due time...always a pleasure reading and reviewing your work :)
Beautiful poetry in the second stanza...relationships are hard work, they have their ups and downs, but when the tenderness you speak of is there, any tribulation can be overcome...that's what came to my mind in reading this piece, I hope I'm not too far off the mark haha Lovely work Mel :)
You are not far off. There is that tenderness. Only, to overcome would imply there be a destinatio.. read moreYou are not far off. There is that tenderness. Only, to overcome would imply there be a destination, or a goal other than that which was in the moment.
Thank you for your review. I really appreciate it. Especially that you called it "Lovely". :-}
11 Years Ago
I know what you mean, and hopefully a destination will reveal itself in due time...always a pleasur.. read moreI know what you mean, and hopefully a destination will reveal itself in due time...always a pleasure reading and reviewing your work :)
I am always writing, but have not joined a writers' group since The Belle Haven when it was in existence. I loved it and really miss it. So when this site was recommended to me, I couldn't resist.
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