This Storm

This Storm

A Poem by Melobldnfr
"

As I've said, "Silence hurts, and distance scares..."

"

12/25/12

 

This storm speaks as my heart:

A tempest born of hope and sorrow.

I say yay, and you say yay,

But then nay

And break me as so many bones borrowed.

I say it is the devil,

Because Love is not confusion.

I'll not have it,

Not one bit,

And have no regret of it.

I am not sorry that I believe

And have true faith in our union

Under God

And thereby rebuke painful pebbles of

Preposterousness cast beneath my feet

By inequity!

I am no stone to be cast away,

As nor are you.

But I cannot pull my boat to a shore

Which at times makes itself an apparition!

I've not gone missing!

Where are you?

 

 

© 2012 Melobldnfr


Author's Note

Melobldnfr
Art: A pending-storm-Paula image posted by cazatormentas on blogspot.

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Oh so powerful and bittersweet. That end killed me.. wow.. I can so relate to that, my tears formed as I read it. Excellent penning my friend..xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


yes, the last two lines wrap this up nicely...

i am still here, and still trying to make this work, where have you gone?

i have been there and felt this...well, three failed marriages...one trying does not make it work.

nicely penned.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written. You used some great metaphors to describe your feelings here. Very good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love those last two lines.......isn't it amazing how someone can confess their undying love one day then throw you away like yesterday's trash? Well done Mel.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a heartsong pleading against the grey of the moment , words felt .

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: new age, contemporary, reflection, retrospection, self, love, introspection, dreams, romance, relationships, life, struggle, imagery

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Melobldnfr
Melobldnfr

Wichita, KS



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