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A Poem by MelissaFig

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            Love is like the wind i cant see, but i can feel it. Around me hugging my soul.

        Never letting go. So pure and clean. Something that can't be seen.

       All the love in the atmosphere glows so bright like the moon light.

The wind blows your hair back with a gental touch.

Then a kiss for good luck to you from me.

© 2009 MelissaFig


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Thanx it just pops up in my head and i write! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


OK, you've been writing for some time now and it shows. You have the presence of mind to format the poem in a way that resembles a wing (shape poetry) and you keep the whole thing light and airy - like the wind. Keep up the good work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I can't really explain how much i love this poem. It's written so well and you did an awesome job of correlating the wind with love. I like it a lot! Thanks for sharing.

XxStaySweet,
Rina

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on October 7, 2009
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MelissaFig
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Im a junior in high school and I want to become a writer one day. Ive been wrtting since I was 12 and im getting into it more as im getting older. more..

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