More To Say

I want this love to be honest and true
I'll always be waiting on you
And to me that's fine
For this time

I just want to be loved without begging
And I want to love you without regretting.
Everything's been said, but not much has been done
And I don't want you to feel like you've won

Sometimes I want you to miss me
Sometimes I try too hard for you to see.
But maybe it's my fault for dreaming
And praying you're never leaving

You don't want me to leave
But you push me away
I don't want you to go
But there's certain things you never show

I need you to let me in
I need you to go within
And give me all of you
Just like I have done too

The more you push
The more I stay
Because I want to know you
In every way

I won't ever force your decision
But I'll beg you to stay
Because since we met its been like a collision
My life into yours and I don't want that to go away

Nothing's wrong, but it doesn't seem right
That some days all we do is fight.

I have more to say
But would you listen ?

I want you to give me something worth fighting for
Because everything So far has left me sore.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

This is so brilliant, I- am - in - awe! I love how the thoughts continue in between stanzas, and the best part is that the musicality carries over so well, too. That second last stanza feels a bit weird to me, though. it's the only weak point of this entire poem. Without it, the poem doesn't lose any charm of mysticity....it would simply be rid of some dead wood that doesn't add anything much to it. Well done overall!

[boygene borice]

I just want to be loved without begging
And I want to love you without regretting.
Everything's been said, but not much has been done
And I don't want you to feel like you've won

every heart that craves for love,will ail out such kind words.
Its a beautiful poem

[wordman]

beautifully written ,love and the hope of a full relationship from you both..