Maybe

Mabye the moons just a hole in the sky
Mabye the answers to never ask why
Is to get the guy you wanted the longest
but never felt like enough,to be honest

With all these thought running through my head
and all these things left unsaid
is tearing me up inside
like its not enough to have no pride


Not having the strength to stand on my own two feet
each night getting no sleep
no longer feeling accepted
even by the things that are reflected 


Feeling the need to give up
like drinking from an old cup
one of the worst things in my trough
and now i know i've had enough

Reviews

[Philip Muls]

I love the ending 'and now I know I've had enough'. Very authentic love pains...please read my story Lovesick, I would like to know what you think.

[Sabrina]

I think it is really good. You should consider turning it into a song if you are into music/singing that kind of thing. Maybe pay a little more attention to formatting;formatting in a poem is always very important. But you obviously have a talent. Keep writing!

[Ojack]

Nothing. Special.
Usual. Negative.

[Teny Johnson]

wow! such creative words so amazing of you.would love to collaborate with u on love topic though.maybe topic like our love wallpaper

[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written keep it up !!