Heartbroken

Deep inside there's a feeling
One that seems to have no healing
The brokenness that never ends
The message that never sends

I want to let it out
I've tried to Scream and shout
But something stops me
Something controls the doubt

I've let you go for the last time
But pieces of you are still here
You've committed the worst crime
And never even knew I shed a tear

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Very poignant! Quite profound. I'm not too sure about the "even" in the last line (it just seems to add unnecessary syllables to an otherwise great line). Other than that this is wonderful. Well done!

[Aphy!]

wow! Really nice hey!
Loved the flow and the feel of this poem. Really simple and yet says a lot!
Well done hey
Thanx for sharing

Aphy

[Coyote Poetry]

You told a sad story in the poetry.
"You've committed the worst crime
And never even knew I shed a tear"
Crime of love can hurt forever. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote