Demons are the Tricksters Inside

Demons are the Tricksters Inside

A Poem by Melissa Lynn Keeling

If we aren't careful
the mind fools the heart
Twisting what's dear
And tears it apart

Demons play tricks
Hurtful thoughts fill the head
Your heart who means well
Speaks softly listen to what's said

Insignificant doings
Little things done wrong
They really mean nothing
Is tricksters favorite played song

Demons constant knocking
The hurt and fear you feel
Is the tricks your mind plays
Most upsetting but not real

Constantly reminding
Betrayal and lies it will say
Will distort the reality
Whispering heart is its prey

Whatever thoughts are put out there
Sets your life in motion
Repeat the hushed heartbeats
Make love your life's magic potion

If something feels wrong
Chances are that its true
Is a bullshit little saying
Don't believe it! I warn you

That's the demons misgivings
They do nothing but lie
Trick the mind smash the heart
Body and soul left empty dry

© 2015 Melissa Lynn Keeling


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One of the themes I love and use, "Demons". Great work on this piece with good flow and content. It sounds that you battle your demons on a line similar to mine. I have written a number of Demon works.

You might like a fun piece http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/wwells13/1533378/ that I did. It comes from a different approach as yours but still fighting the demons.

Very well done and thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melissa Lynn Keeling

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words and stopping by! I'm checking that link now, thanks a bunch :)



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well they are real,and they mess with your mind often,so just praise jesus when they start
they will leave

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melissa Lynn Keeling

9 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by and the review! :)
Twists and turns and new thoughts on an old adage.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melissa Lynn Keeling

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review! :)
One of the themes I love and use, "Demons". Great work on this piece with good flow and content. It sounds that you battle your demons on a line similar to mine. I have written a number of Demon works.

You might like a fun piece http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/wwells13/1533378/ that I did. It comes from a different approach as yours but still fighting the demons.

Very well done and thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melissa Lynn Keeling

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words and stopping by! I'm checking that link now, thanks a bunch :)
I love this you did an amazing job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melissa Lynn Keeling

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and taking time to comment :)
Rachael Lea

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. I enjoy seeing feedback when people read my work otherwise I'll sit there and secon.. read more
Melissa Lynn Keeling

9 Years Ago

Nailed it! Lol that's me

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Added on December 10, 2015
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