Heartache

A sickness like this one youll know from the start, stings like no other the poor beating heart,
A retched ache unlike any before, it starts here and spreads keeping you sore
The stomach next will pay the price, as will all organs no doubt its not nice
Hungrily chewing its way all around, this is real heartache endless limits no bounds
Your bowels will grumble and kidneys will scream, a break from all this 'Oh Please' you can dream
Yet no sleep is part of this as well, as all of you beg and wish for hell
whole body now engulfed and aflame, the last thing to go is the mind its no game
Sickness of the the heart and mind, is by far the worse thing you will ever find.
Oh just to have inspiration here! But no its just loss of sanity hope and racked fear
Mad run to hospital a doctor youll want, something to ease this ache fast and upfront
There's nothing you'll find in the medical field, to heal the sickness you carry and yield
The Most powerful med only one of its kind, is hardest to swallow that old gandfather time.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, time is that enemy, but also heartache, and enough of that can wear us down even faster...

nicely expressed....the ache of the heart.

[Melissa Lynn Keeling]

Thank you for the compliment and for the review :)

[Kirsty Woodward]

I adore this. Beautifully written and put together. Really captures the pain felt during heartbreak.

[Melissa Lynn Keeling]

Thanks! Its exactly how I felt ;)

[jesserose99]

This is a dark, twisted look a heartache. I like it a lot! The last line ties it up in a neat little package.

[Melissa Lynn Keeling]

Thank you!!!