Ocean Pulse

The snap of the sail

like a crisp linen sheet

colored the silence

 

Waves breaking

on the beach

sing out a lullabye

 

Palm trees dance

in an island breeze

a silent serenade

 

Moonlight glimmers

like diamonds on

a sea of dreams

Reviews

[Honeypot]

"The snap of the sail like a crisp linen sheet" that line pops and set the theme for the whole poem. Its really a delight for the senses. Wonderful.

[Jinelly]

i love the picture it paints.
it was very good:]