I cry for him
A Poem by
Melissa Kesead
I watch him stand
a face in the crowd
and I cry for him
He's known to no one
loved by no one
utterly alone
I see his eyes
they're full of tears
cloudy and dim
His body shivers
from the cold
skin and bones
The street's his home
a child alone
I cry for him
© 2009 Melissa Kesead
Featured Review
A beautiful and sad poem . It strikes at the
soul of mankind.
Each of us is perhaps only steps away from the
condition of which you write. It makes us stop
and think----what if ?
This is perhaps the story of a child, observed, which
makes it even more pitiful.
I think you are a gifted writer. You have touched each
of your readers in a special way, in that tender place.
I will be reading more of you soon.
------ Eagle Cruagh
Posted 15 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Beautifully said!
Sad but amazingly written
Posted 15 Years Ago
Beautifully said!
Sad but amazingly written
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
ouch very harsh
great write
Posted 15 Years Ago
ouch very harsh
great write
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A beautiful and sad poem . It strikes at the
soul of mankind.
Each of us is perhaps only steps away from the
condition of which you write. It makes us stop
and think----what if ?
This is perhaps the story of a child, observed, which
makes it even more pitiful.
I think you are a gifted writer. You have touched each
of your readers in a special way, in that tender place.
I will be reading more of you soon.
------ Eagle Cruagh
Posted 15 Years Ago
A beautiful and sad poem . It strikes at the
soul of mankind.
Each of us is perhaps only steps away from the
condition of which you write. It makes us stop
and think----what if ?
This is perhaps the story of a child, observed, which
makes it even more pitiful.
I think you are a gifted writer. You have touched each
of your readers in a special way, in that tender place.
I will be reading more of you soon.
------ Eagle Cruagh
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I mite some like a totally nerd and maybe you won't know what I'm referencing this to but I'm going to do it anyways...This poem reminds me of naruto and hinata's relationship in every way. Very Well Written.
Posted 15 Years Ago
I mite some like a totally nerd and maybe you won't know what I'm referencing this to but I'm going to do it anyways...This poem reminds me of naruto and hinata's relationship in every way. Very Well Written.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
How often do people see this and just walk by pretending not to see. It is the funny thing about America we are truly blind to the sadness around us. very heartfelt write.
Posted 15 Years Ago
How often do people see this and just walk by pretending not to see. It is the funny thing about America we are truly blind to the sadness around us. very heartfelt write.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This made my eyes water a little.. well conveyed message..
Posted 15 Years Ago
This made my eyes water a little.. well conveyed message..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on April 17, 2009
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Melissa Kesead Key West, FL
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I am a wife and mother of two young children who give me ideas for books constantly. I live in Key West, Florida and when I'm not writing I enjoy fishing, lobstering and being on the water whenever p..
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