The Love is Over

Feathers float

land on the floor

the love is over, there is no more

 

Bubbles rise

on the surface burst

the best is over, what's left...the worst

 

Rain falls

rivers rise

there's nothing left one could disguise

 

Glass break

falls on the rug

no one left to kiss, to hug

 

Balloons escape

into the sky

now it's time to say goodbye

 

Footsteps echo

out the door

the love is over, there is no more

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Footsteps echo

out the door

the love is over, there is no more


succinctly put~ the ending of the love relationship as mattter of factly
a terse flowing piece so beautifully penned

THanks for sharing in the HB hotel contest~Fran

[Monday Parker]

wow, Gave me the chills....Its soo...So... Edgar Allan Poe...I dont know what about it that give me that feeling, but there is something...Wow, very well written!!!! i love it! Thank you for sharing!!!!