Love Lost

          It was Friday, as i stand in the cold, my heart was like it was punch. I was in the school yard, waiting for my friends Ariel and Chole to get out of the bus. As I was thinking about my best friend Jutsin. Then as I waited a, a finger was on my shoulder. Justin said," suprise". As i was still in suprisment, i started to say quiely,"hi Justin"," I was thin..." i stoped myself from sayig i was thinking about you. I knew Justin knew what i was about to say. I felt like Justin should be mine, but... i knew that never was going to happen. Justin had a girlfriend named Samanta. She had light blue eyes, long blond hair and was very skinny like me. I knew i couldn"t beat her to get Justin. I had long stright black hair with light brown highlights. My eyes was like sapphires, i really liked him. When i went to the flower garden just to let my feeling out, i saw Samanta and Justin kissing under a rose hanged on the gate. I wanted to sream and cry at the same time. 

 

           

Reviews

[Bexfinch]

Wow,so sad and trumatic,I ould so advise you to make this a joural entry of love lost and monday i hed some things about you i wanna talk to you about it. it hert like so bad. but nice story so and so and AWSOME