His Sacrifice

The shattered pieces of Your heart

Burdened with lies, deceits and crimes

You endured the pain from our flaws

And give us chances all the time

 

Every breath that You’ve given us to inhale

Attempts of renewing us which leads to no avail

As we failed You once again

Your love and mercy ended up in vain

 

We know how deceitful we have been

Right up from above you might have seen

The excruciating pain Your son have bore

His sacrifice which symbolizes His compassion and care

 

Now walking out from the shadows of our sins

As we wash away our sanity

Strengthen our faith and live up to your sanctity

We shall open our doors to worship you in unity

 

As your disciples we shall reconcile

Even if it takes us to walk a mile

Following the path that you’ve decided

Nothing shall go wrong with Jesus and His might

Reviews

[Melissa T]

thanks! :)

[Not A Writer]

Good write before Easter. Good job in expressing what the Lord has done and how we often fail.

[Kristen]

I like this piece a lot, the flow of it is nice and the diction is simple but powerful. Good write!

- S.T.