The Way You Make Me Feel

Is this what love is supposed to be -
A darkness smothered over me?
Is this how I am supposed to feel -
Like worthless, useless, tasteless, veal?
Is this the best that I deserve -
To be treated like I was made to serve?
Is this the best that I'll get from you -
A lifeless marriage made for two?

Reviews

[emmajoy]

You write so beautifully, soft phrases wrapped around tragedy... such a waste of your incredible skill.
So wish you could stand firm and fight for light, dear friend.

[Melissa Kester]

Thank you. You have no idea.just how.much those words mean to me. I am in the.midst of that battle.

[emmajoy]

If you need a friend, leave me a message, will get back asap, Melissa.

[emipoemi]

Another gem. There's a small error in that one "the" in Line 5 should be "this" but other than that, this is short, powerful, and amazing! Well done!

[Melissa Kester]

Thank you for spotting that. I will surely fix it.

[Serendipity Planet]

I love your words
I don't love how you feel
But its good you expressed it so well
I hope that will bring some relief

[Melissa Kester]

Thank you.