When I Danced

On a warm starry night
Amidst the summer breeze
I took a deep breath
And put my heart on my sleeve
It was the middle of June
When I danced with the moon

On a foggy autumn morn'
When the leaves began to change
You gave me your heart
And those words, we exchanged
It was then that I sinned
And I danced with the wind

On a cold winter's eve
With presents to share
You gave me a ring
And a promise so rare
It was then that I glowed
As I danced with the snow

On a blossoming spring day
With life all anew
And Easter surprise
We'd soon no longer be two
New life had begun
When I danced with the sun

On a warm starry night
Among family and friends
We whispered our vows
And swore love without end
It was the middle of June
When we danced with the moon

Reviews

[emipoemi]

My only comment concerns "blossoming".....one too many syllables for the musicality to be able to carry over (similar note with "soon", although this one is just passable). Other than that - wOw! 100% wOw! Well done!