When You Leave I Die

is all my poetry about you?

is that what you do?

draw it out like streams of water

and leave me dry and cracked and wrinkled

i smile too much

i laugh too hard

and when you leave i die

Reviews

[poetic soul]

pain unbearable... the emotions tossing in yo heart about this "someone" hurts a lot... liked the free verse too and felt nice to know, you dint try to forcefully rhyme it..

Regards,
Poetic Soul