expiration date

you find that evrything in the world has an expiration date, so how would you act when that days finally come

i find that i am suffocating

not quite drowning but something more

the weight on my chest

a burden with no regret

the noose on my neck tightly worn

 

I find that my lung are burting

spurred by my increased blood flow

my blood is still churning

yet i find that im yearning

something that will never grow

 

I find that my eyes are hazy

a dream turned into a foe

a beam of light trickles in

but my brain ceased to function

the light is now null

 

i find that im close to extinction

a timer goes off in my head

reaching a fools expiration date

i find that im finally dead

Author's Note

i wrote this on a spur of the moment in the 5 minutes of free time i had right before bed. i didnt make anycorrections after i wrote it so you are free to comment as you see fit. I'd rather have an honest answer then something thats covered in lies

Reviews

[Bloody Writer]

This is an interesting piece. there are some things that can be changed in my opinion, but overall very nice.