a burning passion

You make me hungry

Blanketed with need

A burning desire

So hard to please

 

The curve of your lips

A sensational grip

Plump but bruised

From a really hard kiss

 

The occasional touch

An elusive blush

A roaring flame

That fills me

 

You start to give in

To the feeling within

Gentle but smooth

I tame you

 

Now you are mine

Two fires one mind

a nice gentle glow

that will slowly grow

Reviews

[Jibey]

Simple but pleasing... a passionate mingling of two lovers

[Mauricio Montoya]

Whoa! I like the flow this piece has, it comes together beautifully.
The choice of words is excellent. Nice………….work
Mauricio

[alesuriko]

Very nicely written. I really enjoyed the rhyme, it flowed extremely smoothly making the poem a very nice read that carried you through without much effort, except for stanza three with "A roaring flame / That fills me" It really doesn't rhyme in the least and it threw the rhythm of the poem off for me. You can sort of get away with "The occasional touch / An elusive blush" because it almost rhymes but not so much with the following two lines.

However, your expression of the emotion and passion is wonderful and erotic. You can really feel how intense this encounter is through the words. I really liked the imagery behind "Blanketed with need." Well done!