Black Rain

song I wrote

Verse 1:

Black rain/ falling down outside my window/ and here I sit/ all shut up in/my

 

room/ trying to think of/ a way to escape/ no one gets me/ and nobody will/

 

ever understand me at all.

 

 

Pre-chorus:

And my heart is all numb/ from the spiked liquor/ you gave me/ and nothing is

 

helping me/ to get back on my feet/ and I don’t know what/ to do…about this now?

 

Chorus:

So kiss me/ just once before I die today/ so please just kill me/ right here, and right

 

now/ and  I’m lying here broken/ propped up against the/ wall/ and your breath

 

was intoxicating/ and I fell for your ploy/so please/ please kill me now!

 

Verse2:

My heart it lay broken/ right in your hands/ and I’m falling into/a downward spiral

 

Pain/ and heartbreak/trapped inside of a black hole/that was left inside of/my

 

Heart/ help me/ to end this nightmare of/ pain and degradation/that is my life.

 

Prechorus:

And my heart is all numb/from the spiked liquor/you gave me/ and nothing is

 

Helping me/ to get back on my feet/and I don’t know what/ to do…about this now?

 

Chorus:

So kiss me/ just once before I die today/ so please just kill me/ right here, and right

 

now/ and  I’m lying here broken/ propped up against the/ wall/ and your breath

 

was intoxicating/ and I fell for your ploy/so please/ please kill me now!

 

Bridge:

Leave my heart alone/ its being crushed by/ a thousand beating drums/ of the

 

Curse that/ you left on the void/ that remains in my chest/ so please, please, just kill

 

Me now/ cause I don’t want to feel this/pain that you cursed me/to bear/ just stop

 

torturing me/ cause I…can’t…take it anymore.

 

So kiss me/just once before I die today/ so please just kill me/ right here and right

 

now/ and I’m lying here broken/ propped up against the/ wall / and your breath

 

was intoxicating/ and I fell for your ploy/ so please/ please…kill me now!!

 

 

Final Chorus:

Just leave me there/ broken and lifeless/ on your bathroom floor/ shredded razor

 

Blades/ imbedded in my/ icy skin/ you were trouble/ but I didn’t see/ how you

 

could be so/ nice/ yet deadly!

 

 

Just cut me out of the picture/ now/ lying there/ with my heart outside my chest/

 

Crushed in shards/ imbedded in my bleeding hands.

 

 

So shut up and leave/ you were trouble but I/ I couldn’t stop thinking/ about all the

 

times/ that we shared/ now leave me lifeless/ and drained of all the love/ that/

 

I..gave…youuuu!

 

 

Okay I get the picture/ but why would you/ leave me here/ inside a living hell/

 

The chaos/ in the scene that was/ torn right of the/ history books/ so keep my heart

 

as/ a token/ a memento/ of the life that I gave you!!

 

 

So listen up cause/ the evil that I created/ is loose and wants me dead/ cause of the

 

girls/ that hurt and broke my spirit/ and robbed me of my/ dignity and humiliated/

 

the life that I once had!!

 

 

Just cut me out of the picture/ now/ lying there/ with my heart outside my chest/

 

Crushed in shards/ imbedded in my bleeding hands.

 

 

So shut up and leave/ you were trouble but I/ I couldn’t stop thinking/ about all the

 

times/ that we shared/ now leave me lifeless/ and drained of all the love/ that/

 

I..gave…youuuu!

 

 

Take me and just/ kiss one last time before/ you take my life/ and take away/

 

My love and life, and trap me an/ eternal December/ lost and all alone!

 

 

So cut me out of the picture/ now/ lying there/ with my heart outside my chest/

 

Crushed in shards/ imbedded in my bleeding hands/ So shut up and leave/ me the

 

hell alone/ inside this bathroom/ and cold as the ice that/ surrounded your heart/

 

You’re nothing but a lying/ evil girl/ and this song is/ for the girl that/ left me

 

Lifeless/ and broken/ thinking about/ all the times we shared/ now I’m drained of

 

all the love that/ I..gave you!!

 

 

A heart is nothing but/ chaos locked up inside/ a body that/ is nothing but a ship

 

in/ a bottle/ filled with the pain/ that’s f*****g up my life/ emotions struggling to

 

get out/ the feelings that/ I have are worthless/ by themselves.

 

Author's Note

...constructive criticism please