Cursed Love

A boys feelings for a girl.

I'm cursed by her
This beautiful killer
She's conquered my mind
And has started killing me from the inside.

When she screams,
My throat aches.
When she cries,
My eyes water.
When she hurts,
My pain is unbearable.

I can't stand
This unmerciful control she has over me.
Does she even realize,
the power she wields?
She's destroying me
Yet in my pain I have fallen for her.

I love her
Her beauty keeps me just inches away from the darkness.
I would surely die for her
But what she really needs
Is me to live for her.

Reviews

[Anicca]

A wonderful poem. 'I would surely die for her, but what she really needs, is me to live for her', this speaks millions in just a few small words. It sounds what you have is worth holding on to. The second stanza also confirms this, love like this is rare. Thanks for sharing and allowing me to reminise.

[Edie]

This is one of the most powerful poem i have read in awhile . The great thing about it is it can apply to anyones relationship with a girl from father to daughter , to husband to wife . !! :)

[Xx_Mizfit_xX]

What powerful emotion lies in this piece.A poem of devotion and love, great read.

[Just Jayren]

An exellent representation of utter infatuation for another. What really impressed me is your use of language to suggest both a literal and non-literal meaning. You've captured a common sense of emotion in this peice, well done

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Cursed and then Cursed some more (My Anthem)!
A wonderfully written poem...Well done (:

B/W

[Cherrie Palmer]

A good poem with a sound message of the depths of love and the power found within it

[Vivek Koshy]

true!!

[Sam Severn]

Powerful n' pure n' painfully honest! The end lines turn n' twist the whole thing around so that what's dark becomes light....FANTASTIC! ㋡

[Holly]

so sad =(

[HardCoreReFusion]

It's scary how well I can relate to this poem man, this is exactly what I needed to read today haha thank you!