Cursed Love

A boys feelings for a girl.

I'm cursed by her
This beautiful killer
She's conquered my mind
And has started killing me from the inside.

When she screams,
My throat aches.
When she cries,
My eyes water.
When she hurts,
My pain is unbearable.

I can't stand
This unmerciful control she has over me.
Does she even realize,
the power she wields?
She's destroying me
Yet in my pain I have fallen for her.

I love her
Her beauty keeps me just inches away from the darkness.
I would surely die for her
But what she really needs
Is me to live for her.

Reviews

[Anicca]

A wonderful poem. 'I would surely die for her, but what she really needs, is me to live for her', this speaks millions in just a few small words. It sounds what you have is worth holding on to. The second stanza also confirms this, love like this is rare. Thanks for sharing and allowing me to reminise.

[Chidoriflower]

She drags you into a darkness, without realizing the power she holds; your heart. Truly beautiful.

[Sarah Jean]

This is beautiful in way I cannot even begin to explain. I really love this. Thank you and well done :)

[Lily Finch]

soo amazing poem :) i love it

[Wolven]

The feelings you've incorporated/implemented into this is amazing, and the whole thing speaks out to me if I'm quite honest. The bit that gets me is 'does she even realise,/ the power she wields?' Great lines. Its also quite true for a vast number of boys, especially those whom one would not expect to have such feelings for a girl.

Beautiful writing!

[Just Kim]

sad write but as well as moving if that makes sense.
very nicely expressed and written out!

[K-mo]

I truly love this piece! It is so good!

[Dream Mistress]

:)

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

A truly beautiful moving peom.

[Sourodip]

Beautiful, strong emotions and love almost intertwines in the powerful poem....
I love the line which says....''I can't stand
This unmerciful control she has over me.''

[CLUTZ]

"When she screams,
My throat aches.
When she cries,
My eyes water.
When she hurts,
My pain is unbearable."

I think these lines are the best in the poem, they're the most powerful. I do like this a lot.