Ocean Memories

A girl thinks about her life and the ocean.

She followed her friend into the water,

It was clear and beautiful,

They were surrounded by people,

In the ocean.

She had fallen in love once before,

He had been there, 

On the beach with laughter. 

They would fall into the water together.

The water was different now.

He was gone.

The water was shallow,

Further out it would be too dangerous.

The creatures would be mad at anyone

That came to disturb them.

Her mother worked

To make people understand 

The importance of the ocean.

If they did not listen 

They would risk everything.

The land and sea held importance

beyond anything they knew.

The island was lonely without the boy,

without the fish,

without safety.

Reviews

[Dinesh Kumar]

Nicely expressed really enjoyed reading

[Rubein Geterminah]

Broken but still determine.
The character from a broken relationship still visits their loveing site where love was anew for reflection.

[Mel Jayne]

yeah totally

[Rubein Geterminah]

You welcome

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Lyrical and lovely. Beaautiful words and imagery of sea and nature. Well- done.

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you so much

[Farhan Shaikh]

Beautiful write, very interesting to read..
Very well written.

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you.

[pia]

this is very well written
its got a nice soothing flow to it !!

[Mel Jayne]

I'm glad you liked it.