Enough

Your thoughts my cage

Your grin my witness

Your strength of weakness

And dreams of decease

Just please Hush

Enough speaking

About love

And us…

The left of us.

Enough wasted sighs

Stars are vanishing

The sky is mourning

O Please silence!

Said light will lead

It didn’t

Said hope will rise

It didn’t

Said sorrow will fade

It didn’t!

Till when am i

Going to believe?

Please...

My words are pathetic

The ground is trembling

I’ll save what’s left of me

Wake up from this strain

I’m far gone now

I’m good as dead

In your freezing arms

And in your inhuman bed

 Enough waiting!

If it doesn’t matter to you

(I don’t know what else does)

If it’s never that simple

(tell me what was)

See I’m all packed up

Ready to meet myself

And remember what I was

Before you inhabited me

And shook my skin

I’m moving to my red lines

And beyond this blue day

Just please hush

Mute your evil look

I loved you

(I did)

But not quite enough

Not to my death

Let me save the story

Craft an eager breath

And seek my new way …

 

Reviews

[Dayran]

In breaking up with someone ... we sometimes come to realize just how we have been bonded together. Nice ...

[Mélania Woolf]

True !
Thank you for reviewing

[Cory Barrett]

and in the end enough is enough

[Mélania Woolf]

It all depends on whether we're ready to let go or not :)

[J. K. Beach]

I love this! "I loved you/(I did)/But not quite enough/Not to my death/Let me save the story/Craft an eager breath/And seek my new way... " This is so flowing an expressive--a very fine job of stringing together words and thoughts and feelings. I wish I could hear one of your poems in Arabic (and be able to understand), I bet it would be amazing...

[Mélania Woolf]

Okay I'm very flattered right now ... So glad you liked it ! I'll try to post more Arabic writings and translate them, then ! Thank you so so much

[Tricia Pattinson]

Another great love poem and well written!

[Mélania Woolf]

It's when it all comes to an end ;) Thank you!

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮Wow, this needs more reviews, because it is truly remarkable. I remember feeling this way years ago. Great work!╰☆╮

[Mélania Woolf]

Thank you so much for your sweet review :D

[Frieda P]

Breaking up is hard to do, but you've written it so eloquently. It's difficult to move on even when we know it's the best thing we can do for ourselves....there's too much or not silences in the end.

Before you inhabited me
And shook my skin

I adore that line....!

[Mélania Woolf]

Wow thanks alot! Glad you liked it , I appreciate your kind words ..

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, I can relate to that 'hush' state of mind...!

[Mélania Woolf]

I hope you got through it ! It's a real hard feeling !

[Frieda P]

Once yes, the second time's a b***h :)

[Mélania Woolf]

Haha You're so right! One gotta learn that some just don't deserve love.