Outside the lines of time

I’ve hidden a lot of stories for you,
A slice of a poem
And some silence
Amid which I tell you
All of what I‘ve never told
To any other soul
Till you come,
And we meet
On a magical breath
Outside the lines of time
Who knows?

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I like the way your mind works...poetically a little slice of heaven when you 'breathe outside the lines of time...'

[Mélania Woolf]

Beyond the rules we were doomed to follow ... We can always have this different soundless love! Thank you for reading ! :D

[Frieda P]

Woo that was poetic, told ya I'd be back! :)

[Mélania Woolf]

haha you are welcome , it's truly a pleasure to read your reviews!

[Violet Stone]

A very nice poem. I like how its short and sweet and my favorite part of this would have to be the ending. Well done and keep up the great work! :)

[Mélania Woolf]

Thanks :D Coming from a great poet like you , it means a lot !

[Violet Stone]

Your welcome and Aww, thank you so much! I never really thought I was good at poetry so that means a lot to me too! :3

[Mélania Woolf]

:D :D Now you have to be certain ,then haha