gr-eight

gr-eight

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

thoughts

breath

is life

and death

revulsion

attraction

is the moment

the reaction

days turn into years

years go by so fast

future is never here

and either is the past

present is ever present

always changing things around

the present is always a gift

that cannot ever be turned down

© 2011 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks


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Loved it...short and extremly real! you knew just the right way to put it. simple but good

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A perfectly placed piece, that one finds easy to read, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

quite an insight...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 21, 2011
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Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN



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I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..

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