The becomming of togetherness

The becomming of togetherness

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
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Written for my husband for our wedding.

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The becomming of togetherness

You have come to me before in dreams but I could never see the faces.

Your eyes are so familiar it seems. Your touch takes me to special places. 

We're so connected to each other when we sit and talk from time to time.

Seems we've always known one another. When I look in your eyes I see mine. 

You are the one I've known forever, that I waited for all of my life.

The laws of faith pulled us together. I was always meant to be your wife.

 Our future will be spectacular with the happiness we are both due.

And if it seems to be familiar, it is just all our dreams coming true. 

If chaos and stress overcome me, or strife and weariness come our way.

I know sticking together's the key and we'll get through it all day by day. 

There is nothing we cannot achieve as we collide and grow together.

All that we need to do is believe that we will become one forever. 

We are two trees growing side by side,

branches freely flowing intertwined.

Sun;

Rain;

Trunk

 and roots

they too collide.

We eventually become one mind.

 

 

MJS

2000

 

© 2009 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks


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So awesomely breath-taking! You described love so perfectly! Great Write

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely beautiful! You write of such love, devotion, honor, commitment, and faith in what is and will come with steadfast devotion!
A perfect tribute for your husband!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN



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I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..

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