Change

Change

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Change is coming

so be prepared.

Life is change

so don't be scared.

Change is hard

but can be beared.

You could change life,

if you dared.

© 2009 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks


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I like it. Short and succinct, yet to the point. Change, the only constant thing, should be accepted, should not be feared and should be there. It's what life is all about. But sometimes it's not very easy to face it; important it is, ignorant we are. :) beautiful write. Like the flow also. Sounds good. :)
~rupam

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Great short poem, a lot of power packed into such a great rhythm. It really flowed and kept you sort of ... hopping to the next line. Except I found that flow slowed or felt slightly awkward in the last two lines. It could be the extra syllables, but it threw the rhythm off for me. Otherwise, great poem about change.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like it. Short and succinct, yet to the point. Change, the only constant thing, should be accepted, should not be feared and should be there. It's what life is all about. But sometimes it's not very easy to face it; important it is, ignorant we are. :) beautiful write. Like the flow also. Sounds good. :)
~rupam

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN



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I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..

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