Magically delicious

This was just for fun!

 

 

My heart is not red when you are not near.

I see the yellow moon and think of you dear.

I would pull down an orange star, just for you, if I could.

Would I roll you over in green clover? Oh yes I would.

All the blue diamonds in the world can't compare to you.

If I had one, I'd give you a purple horseshoe.

Just being with you grants all of my wishes.

You're my lucky charm. You're magically delicious.

Author's Note

I know that this is chalk full of cliche's and I do not care because I had fun writing it and it made me smile.

Reviews

[Stephanie]

"You're my lucky charm. You're magically delicious."

That was just the cutest ending I've read in a while! It does seem like you had fun with this because it comes across and makes the reader smile too. As for the cliches, we could do with more of them in life anyways! I really loved this- it was sweet and charming (pun intended). :D

[A]

I LOVED this! So much fun to read and made me want to eat some Lucky Charms. :) Great poem!

CONGRATULATIONS! :)

[J. Hampton]

Lol....

I adore this...

" I swear on the magically delicious thing all the time "

This was a sassy bit-o-fun ! ( made me smile too )

Blesssssssssssss

[Jane Doe]

Again, what a delightful piece. I love it, it's so fun to read. The different colors for each line are great, reinforces what you are writing. Great job!

[avant security guard]

yes, I liked it---
also, the other one about green--very nice--
only one thing that bothers me--the centering--but maybe I'm just not ready for that--
the colors in the type--that's different--though at the end, you abandoned it---
your kindness shines though--I read a bunch of your poems--many too short--were they haiku?
I like a fully loaded poem & this one--with colors, did that--& also the one about green--spell check your bio----otherwise your site is spectacular

[Brenda Sue]

I love this piece and it is so much fun and lighthearted. Excellent job. Beautifully penned.

[Brianna Brie]

You're my lucky charm. You're magically delicious.

Light hearted and fun. That last line is my favorite.

[Moonlit-Blues]

hehe, very sweet though. Magically delicious. Love the poem, cheesy, but hey! Little bit of romantic magic makes the world go round. =D

[Eagle Cruagh]

What a colorful piece !
Very nice.
Thank you .
---- Eagle Cruagh

[lori c]

aaaawww this is very cute, fun, and has to bring a smile to the face of anyone who reads it. a real delight. (now i want some cereal for a midnight snack LOL)