Irish Green

With some Irish Spring, I lather well.

Green Apple shampoo, I love the smell.

Whistle clean now, I hang my green rag.

I wear my lime shirt and jeans with green tag.

In my hunter green truck I drive off to work.

Irish cream in my coffee, for a nice perk.

Her emerald eyes greet me at the door.

She says to me, "Why all the green for?"

I try to think of something Irish to say.

Then she says, "St. Patrick's was yesterday."

 

Reviews

[Not Afraid of Bruises]

Instead of "Why all the green for?" I'd suggest "What's all the green for?" I think it still flows with your poem - and it makes more sense. Did you mean to type "what's"?

Charming and very funny - You should try making some of these into e-cards, if you want to. I think you might even be able to sell them and promote your work. (some people are insulted when I suggest this, no idea why, but please don't be mad)

Thanks for sharing, it made me smile :D

[R.G. Bennet]

Love this! Haha, the poor fellow. *adds to favourites*

[The Wandering Cactus]

This may complicate the flow a little bit but you may want to put "a" in front of "green tag". Also instead of saying, "Why all the green for?" I would suggest changing it to "What's all the green for?" Other than lovely poem. I like the use of the different shades of green that you use for your text. The ending was the best part. You really wrap up your poem quite well. Well done.

[Lauren Xena Campbell]

Bravo! This certainly made me chuckle and I love all the ways you refer to the colour, couldn't have been easy I'm sure. Really enjoyed this! Great Write!

[Brianna Brie]

LOL...funny one. I was disappointed this year that I forgot to put on my green tee and drink a few beers. Great write.

[Angel Bird]

A very easy flowing and funny read! I smiled all along and in the end I laughed wholeheartedly.

I enjoyed this write immensely. Big thanks for sharing this wonderful work!

[AngelEyes]

This one made me laugh...very light hearted and well done.

[SM Davis]

cute!!!

[ELii]

Very witty. Made me smile. Nice job!

[L.G. Knight]

Lol that was GREAT!
I laughed so hard great ending...

~Frances~

[TL Boehm]

Ok I cracked up. That was refreshingly witty, and humorous. Well done.