Tears Of Joy

Through squinted doors

over plump cheeks

I travel.

Gravity

pulls

me

down

and I land

on the shaky

 surface of the body

 from which I just came.

The cackling sound

 of laughter fills

 the air.

 

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

lolz..
This one is really different!
"Tears of laughter" :D :D
As, normally we consider tears like a symbol of sorrow and pain.
But this one is really different and even made me laugh :D
Great write :)

[DarkAngelWriter]

I love the formatting :D

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

Lol i like this one..i love the part where you say down and the words kind of channel down and make me wanna read on...i love the format of it..it looks good..and the fact that its in the shape of a Tear is brilliant..I love that it is about a tear traveling to..like it is in the Point of View or the tear..crazy hott!! lol i loved it..i need to try some more type of poems with designs i think it is an art form that attracts me just from just the shape of it..i enjoyed this one..good work..
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s