alone

People living life,

traveling on crowded streets,

feeling all alone.

 

 

Reviews

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

That is a poem..it is short but it uses descriptive words and it explains what the picture means..i understand the style that you are trying and i admire that you are venturing out and expanding your talents..i think every writer should try new styles..it challenges our abilities and makes us better writers..i kind of have to disagree with the reveiwer below me, but i respect that she may not be familiar with this style and that may be why she did not like it..but i think you executed it well..i enjoyed it..
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write WIth Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

Umm, is this a poem? Sorry , I'm used to long poems that flow and rhyme. That looks like a caption for a picture maybe?...You've lost me