Our shell

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Wishing to be free,

we experience this life

fighting our egos.

© 2008 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

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Angel Bird

Wonderful and VERY thought provoking words. I can't start with my own philosophy about the EGO, it would become a pages filling speech.
This is really great! Few words - profound meaning!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolfwind Words

Simple yet true! I believe that i shall pull my sword and cut the ego away! I shall not succumb to it! I won't!
Great little write! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 10, 2008
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Author

Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN

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I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..