Winters End

Birthday Haiku

 

 

The death of Winter

brings a happy funeral.

Happy Birthday Spring!

 

Reviews

[zainul]

The poem brings Spring in the heart and create a garden full of flowers.
Very vivid piece.

[eatmills]

I love the theme, and the idea of a happy funeral that brings new life. Very nice write indeed.

[Jacqueline]

We share the same sentiments...this was a good haiku that people can relate to :)

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

cute and fun - i am ready for winter to be burried ...
nicely done

[DarkAngelWriter]

Aw. A life and a death. I love this :)

[Steffi]

Cute :D I love spring!

[Angel Bird]

This is lovely, but here it doesn't look like it either. Everything is frozen outside, and the sun is rising to a blue sky.

Your words are inspiring ...

[AK]

Yes indeed! I just wish it would come a little quicker. It's -14 F here.

[Brenda Sue]

Beautifully written. Great job.

[Brianna Brie]

Nice pleasant surprise on the picture.